55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words. Read for the first time at The Chronicles of a techie.
Here is my First Attempt at Fiction and my First Attempt at 55 Fiction!
A Farce
Sitting on the terrace, one early morning, they smiled as they sipped their tea. They laughed when a squirrel came close. They cheered as the kids played ball. They hummed a silly new song together. What a Bliss! And then a phone call… “Ya..Chetna er Chetan…Tell me… yes…no” and she knew it was all over.
Great attempt..and of course a great result! :)
ReplyDeleteThe story leaves numerous interpretations!! WHat finally happened? What was that phone call about? It would be definitely there in your mind...do share.
hey tht's an intriguing one indeed! quite a suspence in d end.. coincidentally evn i hv posted a 55-Fiction 2day.. hav a luk:)
ReplyDeleteThat was perfect ....really a good start... a story with an element of suspense ... gr8... and thanks for mentioning my name :D
ReplyDeleteawesome one! positively loved it !! ... lets see i'll try one too ... (will be a huge flop anyways)
ReplyDeletewow..great one...never tried those... its difficult too.....
ReplyDelete@ Amrit: Thank you Amrit!!
ReplyDeleteYes there could be lot of interpretations. You tell, me what you thought, I'll share my idea soon! :)
@ Vipul: What a coincidence! I checked yours 55 Fiction! Its good!
@ Dhiman: Thanks Dhiman!
ReplyDeleteI just followed the words of wisdom I read somewhere: "CREDIT IS GIVEN WHERE CREDIT IS DUE" :D
@ Subhayan: Thank you Subhayan. And you must try it too! All the best!
@ Shankar: Thanks Shankar! There's a first time for everything! Even this one is my First. Go for it!! Good Luck! :)
Nice one. Really wonderful. Well written, which left hidden scope-----. I felt it as a beautiful poem.
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@ M Verma: Thank you Mr. Verma. Its great to know that you liked this fiction! :)
ReplyDeleteHmmm.. liked the concept!
ReplyDeleteIs everyone allowed to carry it out?
@ Pawan: Its a free world! Anyone can do it! Try it out! All the best! :)
ReplyDeleteSure I will!
ReplyDeleteExpect one round the corner!
A good read... and intriguing too!
ReplyDelete@ Roshmi: Thanks :)
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